Monday, April 8, 2013

Fake Logline Winners!

Here are Holly Bodger's top nine:

THIRD PLACE (query critique):

#8 -- Query critique from Tara Dairman
#26 -- Query critique from Monica Goulet
#45  -- Query critique from Stephanie Scott
#48 -- Query critique from Nicole Wolverton

SECOND PLACE (1 first-chapter critique plus 1 query critique)

#15 -- First-chapter critique from Danielle Jensen, query critique from Michael Gilmartin
#18 -- First-chapter critique from Dorothy Dreyer, query critique from Monica BW
#31 -- First-chapter critique from Kristi Helvig, query critique from Stacey Lee

FIRST PLACE ( a first-chapter critique from 3 authors plus 1 query critique)

#12 -- First-chapter critique from Sarah Brand, Karen Akins, and JM Frey; query critique from Alice Loweecey
#22 -- First chapter critique from Beth Hull, Jenn Malone, Josh McCune; query critique from Kristi Helvig

All critiques have been generously donated by MSFV Success Story authors -- thank you, guys!

HERE IS THE LIST OF ENTRIES, in case you'd like to read the winning entries.

And congratulations to our winners.  Please email me at facelesswords(at) for submission instructions!


  1. Congrats to everyone, and thank you Authoress and critiquers for this great opportunity.

  2. Congratulations to the winners! What fun!

  3. Congrats to all the winners...I'm excited to critique! :)