Dearest hearts! I definitely messed up the submissions for this one, and I'm sorry! Thank you to all entrants who were willing to flex and email your entries directly.
(This felt like old times, before I had an automated system. I have twitch-worthy memories of having to create 50 posts by hand for the Secret Agent contests. My, how easily we get spoiled!)
At any rate, here are 12 diverse entries for your critiquing pleasure!
PLEASE REMEMBER HOW IMPORTANT IT IS TO SHARE YOUR FEEDBACK ON AS MANY OF THESE YOU HAVE TIME FOR. We strengthen our critiquing chops every time we give it a try. Giving and receiving honest, helpful critique is an important part of our journey as authors. This is a safe environment for you to dive in and do it!
GUIDELINES:
1. ENTRANTS: Please critique a minimum of 3 other entries as your way of giving back.
2. It's helpful to start by commenting on something you like.
3. Be kind. Corrective criticism is never harsh.
4. ENTRANTS: Don't try to justify yourself by "explaining things" to critiquers in the comment box. Most of their questions are meant for you to answer yourself, as you revise. If you feel the need to explain your writing, then your writing isn't clear. Take the critique notes with you when you begin your revisions.
5. I can't police all these comments. If you see something inappropriate, please email me.
Thank you all for your participation! This is the heart and soul of the Miss Snark's First Victim community, and I'm thankful to have jumped back in.
I love these critiques I did one here awhile back and it was so helpful. Best wishes to all the entrants.
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