Tuesday, June 22, 2010

25 Words #7

TITLE: Soul Catcher
GENRE: Urban Fantasy

In the last eight hours, I had totaled a company car and lost the soul of a serial killer.

14 comments:

  1. Busy day!

    No suggestions here, I just want to see what happens next!

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  2. very intriguing... I'm hooked

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  3. Great opening. The juxtaposition of the mundane and the supernatural is perfect; it sets the tone straight off.

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  4. Loved it! My first thought was "That can't be 25 words. Why didn't she give us another sentence?"

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  5. Although I have never totalled a company car nor lost the soul of a serial killer, I still feel sympathy for your MC. Good job.

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  6. Great start. Love the tone.

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  7. Great start that shows the urban fantasy elements right away.

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  8. Great. Puts me in the main characters head, gives me tone and voice--everything I need to want to read on.

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  9. Def hooked - love the juxtaposition of something that could be somewhat ordinary (totaling a car) and fantastical (losing a soul, especially that of a serial killer). You've got me - perfect as is.

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  10. Wow! Hooked in one sentence. Great opening line.

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  11. Love it! I want to read more.

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  12. Yeah, that's cool! To me, this sentence defines the genre "Urban Fantasy"

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  13. Excellent beginning. Yes, I would like to read more.

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