TITLE: MG
GENRE: SECRET
Few call me brave, but none call me foolhardy. Today, I have been both.
I was sitting across from Humphrey and between two of his fellow clarinetists in the middle school cafeteria on the second-to-last day of school before summer vacation. The conversation took a boring turn, when Hwan asked if anyone had noticed the loud squeak he'd made in the final movement of Armenian Dances during the band concert last night.
"My reed split!" he said. Nolan and Humphrey chuckled and shook their heads sympathetically, then launched into tales of "funny" band moments of their own.
I'm not in band, so I had nothing to say. Who listens to a conversation when there is no chance of jumping into it? Nobody.
I pushed the peas around my lunch tray and considered my options. Could I shoot a pea into Hump's mouth, right across the table from me?
Humor
ReplyDeleteI like this.
Contemporary.
ReplyDeleteDidn't seem to have any specific markers of other genres.
Contemporary
ReplyDeleteThe opening line had a historical feel, but none of the rest did, so I'm just figuring the mc's a smart kid whose life changes when he follows the urge to do something he thinks will be funny.
Contemporary.
ReplyDeleteNothing here marks it as fantasy/sci-fi/mystery so far.
Humor/realistic fiction.
ReplyDeleteSeems like everyday life in a middle school.
Humor/realistic fiction.
ReplyDeleteSeems like everyday life in a middle school.
Contemporary, realism. Waiting for more humor to confirm that direction.
ReplyDeletemodern setting
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ReplyDeleteCONTEMPORARY.
ReplyDeleteThis is MG so there is to have some humor, but here the moment sounds more tragic than funny. So, there is only one choice left. After all, this passages shows a boring day at school.
Contemporary
ReplyDeleteNo indication here of anything sci fi or fantasy or historical, as far as I can see.
Contemporary, given the everyday school setting.
ReplyDeleteContemporary. Love the voice!
ReplyDeleteContemporary
ReplyDeleteRight before something major is about to happen, I'm guessing. Otherwise, it's a typical school day in middle school at lunch.
I can't tell
ReplyDeleteSomehow this mc seems quite a lot older than MG. How many kids even think in terms of bravery and foolhardiness, let alone have enough time to develop a general reputation among their peers in regard to both?
Contemporary
ReplyDeleteAlthough I have to say that foolhardy made me stop and wonder for a bit before the voice, the topic being discussed and the setting made me think Contemporary.
Contemporary
ReplyDeleteNormal school day, but I would watch your voice to make sure it sounds MG.
Contemporary Realistic.
ReplyDeleteHumor may be an aspect. I like that one of the characters is named Hwan and the music piece is Armenian, suggested Multicultural aspects.
Contemporary.
ReplyDeleteBecause of the setting but my gut tells me there might be a portal. If so portal fantasy.
Contemporary.
ReplyDeleteBecause of the setting. However my gut says it is too boring of a school day so something is going to happen. Maybe a portal. If so portal fantasy.
Contemporary - adventure. It seems like the scene is set for the end to a ho-hum school year and the anticipation of an adventure-filled summer, probably involving the boys at the lunch table.
ReplyDeleteContemporary realism.
ReplyDeleteNothing indicates other genres.
Contemporary
ReplyDeleteContemporary. Very funny! Unless the pea chokes his friend, and it turns dark....
ReplyDeleteContemporary Realistic.
ReplyDeleteMiddle-school setting and MC looking to liven things up a bit.
Contemporary
ReplyDeletemiddle school - wonder what he did that was foolhardy - nice opening line