TITLE: YA
GENRE: Secret
At Misdemeanors Academy for Paranormals (MAP), or suck-it club for rich and spoiled brats, they called me Janna the psychic klutz. I earned my nickname on my first day because every time they asked me to control a Ouija, I blew someone across the room. Too bad MAP Academy didn’t have cheap furniture and modern decorations.
Gee, at least I had insurance. One week into the program, and I already owed them big, like millions in damage. So, when I was summoned to the library this morning to be handed the keys and put in charge of inventory, I thought someone had loosened the brains’ screws of the two men standing in front of me and sent the bolts away. Because that also put me in charge of the Ouija boards and made me virtually responsible for my parents’ future double mortgage. At sixteen, it was no way to start.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteOther than the 16 yr old MC, I would have guessed Middle Grade in the set up.
Paranormal
ReplyDeleteMAP kindof gives it away
Paranormal
ReplyDeleteBecause of the academy :D
Fantasy. With a name like Misdemeanors Academy for Paranormals, I couldn't think of anything else.
ReplyDeleteParanormal.
ReplyDeleteIt's in the first sentence. :-)
Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteThe school may deal with paranormal powers, but the fact that there is a school makes it Fantasy to my mind.
Paranormal Romance
ReplyDeleteFirst line.
Paranormal Fantasy
ReplyDeletePsychic, ouija, etc.
Paranormal Fantasy
ReplyDeletePsychic, ouija, etc.
Paranormal
ReplyDeleteIt's right in the name of the school :) and the blowing students across the room, etc.
Paranormal. Not sure if realism or fantasy, but leaning toward former with the mention of insurance.
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ReplyDeleteIt says so in the first sentence.
Paranormal, due to Captain Obviouspants! :)
ReplyDeleteParanormal, due to Captain Obviouspants! :)
ReplyDeleteParanormal.
ReplyDeleteOr it could be fantasy, it does have something supernatural in it, a psychic klutz.but I'm guessing there will be more to come.
Fantasy
ReplyDeletewhat is the actual difference between paranormal and fantasy? I guess it could be either.
Paranormal
ReplyDeleteThe name of the academy and the MC being a psychic led to this decision. The sample feels more MG than YA to me.
Fantasy/Paranormal...I couldn't decide. I like it.
ReplyDeleteFantasy/Paranormal...I couldn't decide. I like it.
ReplyDeleteParanormal
ReplyDeleteActually, paranormal problem novel. If it was MG, then also coming-of-age.
Paranormal.
ReplyDeletePretty obvious from the name of the school.
Paranormal
ReplyDeleteBecause of the name of the school and the mind control.
Paranormal Fantasy or Magical Realism.
ReplyDeleteOuiji = spirits. Magical realism: psychic powers; mind/object control a la Matilda.
Paranormal -
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like fun to read.
I think with a little tweaking, you can make your first paragraph read less like backstory. You can just say "they call me .... because every time I control the Ouija board..."
I know it's hard when people crit the very first few paragraphs because you always want to say "but you don't see what happens NEXT!" :) but for whatever it's worth, those are the words that catch or release an agent's attention and usually anything that smacks of backstory will release.
Good luck!
Paranormal but in the near future, like Xmen.
ReplyDeleteParanormal. Paranormal school.
ReplyDeleteParanormal.
ReplyDeleteParanormal academy and psychics involved.
Paranormal Fantasy
ReplyDeletethe school's name gave it up in the first sentence
Thank you for reading my entry.
ReplyDeleteThis is PARANORMAL FANTASY.
Fantasy would be the genre and paranormal the sub-genre.