TITLE: YA
GENRE: SECRET
The wood of the door fails to mute Jilana’s wrath. “Fragments, Mazani, why!”
After each yell comes a strained silence.
“That’s months of someone’s work you’ve ruined!”
I would not be brave enough to defy Master Jilana. But Mazani is. After each refusal to speak her mother roars louder. The weavers around me stare at their looms, hands frozen in mid-knot. My mother’s eyes dart between the door and me.
It was Mazani’s idea to lead us into battle. Her game, us versus the novices from the competitor’s workshop. Jilana’s other prentices -- we just follow along, Mazani’s little posse.
“Why!”
Mazani’s victims retaliate, of course: knives mysteriously blunted. Dragon dung on the yarn. If a journeymen sits on a thorn meant for us, we take the blame to hide our own inciting pranks.
But this is different. This was an accident. Mazani would never have tipped a loom.
Medievil fantasy?
ReplyDeleteI remember seeing a post in an earlier contest about a girl and her loom. Is this a continuation of that story? Sort of has a fantasy Sleeping Beauty/ Reality TV contest mash-up.
I have never posted here before, but thanks!
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ReplyDeleteAt first I thought historical with the looms and the master but when the dragon dung was mentioned it had to be fantasy.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteBecause of the dragon dung. Up until then, I thought it was historical.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteBut I had no clear idea until 'dragon dung'.
Historical Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteThe unusual curse (Fragments!) and slang (prentices) plus the dragon dung.
Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteLooms, dragons and the unusual names.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteDragon Dung, (which doesn't sound pleasant BTW)
Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteDidn't know until the mention of the dragon.
Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteDidn't know until the mention of the dragon.
Thought historical until the mention of the dragon, so fantasy.
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ReplyDeleteBattling weavers suggests something magical, and of course there are dragons.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteI was going historical until a dragon pooped on me.
Teehee!
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ReplyDeletedragons
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteThe names and the dragon dung.
Fantasy. Mention of the dragon led me to this conclusion. Unless, of course, the 'dragon dung' is just a name and not a reference to a real dragon.
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ReplyDeleteDragon dung on your doorstep's a dead giveaway.
Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteDragon poo.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteThe names, the expletive Fragments!, the 'prentices' all suggest some imagined time and place. Then there's that drangon poo.
Fantasy
ReplyDeleteYep, dragon dung did it for me too.
Fantasy.
ReplyDeleteBecause of the mention of "Dragon dung."
Fantasy. It has an air of other-worldness, plus there is dragon dung.
ReplyDeleteHistorical Fantasy. Could've been straight historical until the mention of the dragon dung.
ReplyDeleteFantasy, also because pf the Dragon dung ...
ReplyDeleteyA medieval fantasy, because of the POV young apprentice character and mischiefmaking, looms, and of course the fantasy excrement.
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ReplyDeletemissed the dragon dung the first time around, so at first was thinking just historical, although the names are also unfamiliar in a fantasy way.
random note: This is a lot of information really fast, which could be fine, except that it includes multiple names, so at the moment I'm having a hard time following the situation.
Thank you for your additional feedback, Hepseba.
DeleteFantasy with a touch of high-school type drama!
ReplyDeleteFantasy- dragon dung, weavers, unusual names
ReplyDeleteFantasy. Dragon dung.
ReplyDeleteSocial commentary in a fantasy setting.
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ReplyDeleteBecause of dragon dung
Otherwise might have been historical
Thank you for your evaluations, everyone. This is straight-up fantasy -- not historical fantasy. I'm intrigued by the guess of "social commentary in a fantasy setting." There is a social commentary aspect of the novel, but I had no idea it was showing in the first few paragraphs.
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