Tuesday, August 21, 2012

First Line Grabber Round 2

Okay, here we go!  The top 16 entries are below.  Each one consists of the first 3 lines of the manuscript.

No voting this time; just feedback.  Do the 3 lines make you want to read more?  Tell why or why not!  And look out for author J.M. Frey in the comment boxes; she'll be critiquing each one and then choosing her five favorites to move to round 3.

Have fun!

1 comment:

  1. I have to say, it's fun watching people guess at what our three lines might mean and where they go from there. Preconceived notions come into play and it's quite interesting!

    And there's some really good three-liners going on. Good job, writers!