TITLE: Lethal Injection
GENRE: Adult Cozy Mystery
A cozy mystery set on a state college commuter campus in Chicago. Amateur sleuth Hallie Peters, Biology Secretary, investigates when one of her professors is injected with poison after hours in the classroom laboratory. She discovers that the victim, respected and beloved, had a history of sexual assault and blackmail. She finds the murderer, uncovers unsavory truths about colleagues, is nearly killed, and befriends the homicide detective on the case.
This sounds really interesting, but I'd like more salesmanship and less synopsis in your pitch. "When a beloved professor at her college is murdered, Biology Secretary Hallie starts investigating on her own, even as the homicide detective warns her to stay out of it..." type of thing. Leave me wanting more. (Which I do- I love a good cozy!)
ReplyDeleteI agree with the first reviewer, this reads more like a short synopsis. Leave us hanging, wondering what's going to happen.
ReplyDeleteAgree with above. Interesting premise. Be sure to let us know why the amateur Hallie sticks her nose into the investigation rather than leaving it to the pros.
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