Here's another DIRECT SUCCESS STORY from our 2011 Baker's Dozen Agent Auction, in the author's words. Read and enjoy!
Hi Authoress,
I wanted to let you know of some exciting agent news. My novel was in
the December Baker’s Dozen contest, and I was one of the fortunate
contestants who had my pitch, #58, bid up to a full (I don’t think I
have ever refreshed my screen so many times!). The agent who “won” my
book was Tamar Rydzinski, and I immediately sent her the manuscript.
She got back to me in less than a week, saying that she really liked
the book, but there were some revisions she thought needed to be made.
She concluded the email by saying that if I made the changes, she
would be happy to take another look.
Most of her suggested changes were fairly easy for me to make, but
there was one that stopped me in my tracks. Not because I didn’t agree
with it – but because I didn’t know how to fix it. I would open the
file and just stare at the screen, then close it without having
changed a word. Obviously, this was super frustrating; and when you
add in working full time and finishing the last semester of my degree,
it was clear I needed a break. So I turned my back on it for a couple
of months.
Then one day in May, I was shampooing my hair in the shower, and the
solution came to me. I immediately set to work and it didn’t take me
long to get all changes made. My readers made a few suggestions, and
by July, it was ready to go. I sent an email to Tamar telling her what
I had done and asking if she would like to take another look. She
quickly responded saying that she would.
On August 14, I woke up to a missed call from NYC... and a voicemail
from Tamar. After I finally calmed down enough to be comprehensible, I
called her back. She talked a bit about the few small changes she
thought needed to be made, and then offered to represent me. A week
later, I accepted.
Authoress, I would like to thank you personally for being instrumental
in getting me to this point in my writing career. The world of
querying can be difficult and frustrating, and I can say without a
shadow of a doubt that your contests resulted in more agents reading
both this book and my prior manuscripts than querying ever did. You
provide an amazing service to the writing community, and your blog
attracts the most wonderful and supportive individuals.
Thank you so much for all the work you do.
Danielle Jensen
Congratulations, Danielle!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story. Way to go, Danielle!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations, Danielle!!
ReplyDeleteIt always happens in the shower, doesn't it?!!
Great story, and encouraging to the rest of us.
ReplyDeleteWow!! That is fantastic!! CONGRATS!!
ReplyDeleteFantastic. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story! Congratulations, Danielle. Good luck to you and your book!!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! Now I can't wait to read the book. This truly is an awesome blog and the authoress is the bomb diggity. :)
ReplyDeleteMaribeth
Congratulations! Now I can't wait to read the book. This truly is an awesome blog and the authoress is the bomb diggity. :)
ReplyDeleteMaribeth
Woot! Congrats!!
ReplyDeleteYay, Danielle! I love to hear these success stories.
ReplyDeleteMe too. I was going to say what he said, honest! Congrats, Danielle! Who-hooo!
ReplyDeleteLove it! Congrats!!!
ReplyDeleteI cracked up about the shower- it's the negative ions, they do it every time. I swear, I should just get a bigger hot water heater so I can stay in there for hours!
Yay. Success stories always make me smile:)
ReplyDeleteHooray! Congratulations, Danielle! Way to stick with revisions, even through the difficult parts!
ReplyDeleteCongrats! It must have been super-frustrating knowing you had an agent waiting and unable to figure out your "fix." Kudos to plowing through!
ReplyDeleteYay! So very happy for you, Danielle! I love those "shower moments" when things click!
ReplyDeleteLoved the story of the process. It's encouraging to the rest of us. Thanks for sharing and congratulations!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! It's true, this is very encouraging. Good luck with the rest of your journey!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for your kind words!
ReplyDeleteI remember your entry and was thrilled to see your success story on QueryTracker--and now here! Mazel tov!
ReplyDeleteThe first paragraph is a strong way to open the book. Funny idea, followed by immediately addressing a problem.
ReplyDeleteAs far as line editing suggestions, I'd add "since it was so far north" to the end of the 2nd paragraph--otherwise people might not understand the detail.
I want to read more--I like the writing, and want to find out what she's capable of doing while sleepwalking.