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How long does this contest last? I'm not sure.
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ReplyDeleteIt's been interesting to read the comments. So much is lost if you just read 250 words. So many comments refer to things that are addressed in the next paragraph or 2. So, I guess that means more has to happen in the first 250 words. Something to think about as I revise and tweak. I really appreciate the feedback.
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ReplyDeleteYes, a lot is lost if you read only the first 250 words of a manuscript. I'm not sure a lot more has to happen in that space, but you should definitely be building toward something.
It's not that more has to happen -- in fact, that is a common error (trying to make too much happen too fast). Rather, the key is building enough inherent tension to make the reader want to keep reading. It's a subtle thing that takes practice!
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ReplyDeleteI agree, too many writers strive to make too much happen within a very short space and it often just doesn't work. It takes time to build an interest in a character or a problem. You don't want to divulge everything at once.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for this opportunity. I really appreciate the feedback!
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