Miss Snark's First Victim
I want to see how tall this cake gets!
I bet it gets pretty big...
oooh, I love this, especially if the cake gets huge!
If the cake gtes huge, then I think this is fine. If it's just going to be a regular size cake, you might reconsider.
So far, I love it. It has a great starting rhythm for a picture book. Also, I’m partial to stories about cakes. Tee-hee. I write about them at every opportunity, so this would hook me.
I love this. Fun and visual even without the illustrations.Makes me wonder if cupcakes are involved as well :)
Love the image. The only thing that bothered me is I stumbled over the "It will" for some reason. Like the second setence was just one beat too long.
I've heard rhyming picture books are difficult to do, but I think this is really charming and I like it! The only thing is I also tripped over "it will be." I think the rhythm was a little different than the first line.
Sounds fun! Wish I could see the pictures.
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