TITLE: FERRY TO BRENTON
GENRE: Adult Upmarket Contemporary
When James loses his ferry captain’s job to Courtney, he’s so mad he won’t even acknowledge her—until she tips him off about the plan to develop his island home into a private golf resort. The only way to preserve those unspoiled ocean views is to team up, which requires James learning to trust a woman from “ashore” and Courtney learning to trust her own instincts.
I would recommend you remove Courtney's inner goal here. This entire thing is about James so it's odd to throw it in the end. If you want to keep it, you will need to balance this with more information about her.
ReplyDeleteGood luck!
Holly
Is this dual POV? If so, I feel it needs to be made clearer.
ReplyDeleteAgree with the above; if it's dual POV then maybe another line about Courtney would be good. If it's single POV then the line about her motives is unnecessary.
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