Miss Snark's First Victim
I like this one, but a date for the setting I think would help!
I like this one. I'm hooked from one sentence. Like Sarah, I'd like to know if this is contemporary or historical fiction. But it's a good pitch!
I'm with the other two. This is a great concept, but when it takes place will change so many plot elements that it almost doesn't work without a date. Still a great pitch!
Good hook. I would like to see more.
Great job with a quick to the point pitch that caught my attention. Good Luck!
I agree that this is good, but would prefer some motivation for the characters. Are they doing this for money? Fame? Boredom?Good luck!Holly
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Oooh intriguing. Please email your query + 3 chapters + synopsis to email@example.com, and include "Birthday Blog Pitch" in the subj line. I look forward to reading!
Very intriguing, but I too am looking for a little more detail. Good luck!
Holy smokes. congrats on the hook and hooking interest from lurking agents!! Nice job. I'd read more.