Miss Snark's First Victim
Hooked. I'd keep reading to find out more.
Hooked. Definitely want to know what's going on.
but that day, the sun beckoned me... Saves you four words.
I'd read more to see what happened. I think I'm hooked.
I like this. Sets the scene, curious about what a Cursed is. Hooked.
Interesting... I'd read on.
Almost hooked--I love post-apoc and I'm intrigued what a Cursed is, but something feels a bit too stiff about the voice to pull me in completely. I'd read on a bit to find out what's going on, though.
Nicely done. I'd read on.
Should it be 'most of the time'? I felt like you missed a word there. But I'd read on, if only to find out what a cursed is. I'm imagining a person in dirty hooded robes with sores on them...