Partially hooked. I'm hoping that his sister's life being saved is the START of the story, not something we're going to jump back in time and work our way up to.
Show me how his/her sister's life being saved sets off a string of other events and I'm with you.
I just wanted to clarify that his sister's life being saved is something that occurs within the first few pages of the story and is also the moment that triggers a series of events. It isn't the end of the novel, but I understand why some may think that since I referred to the day as "that day" instead of "this day" (which was something I was debating before).
Great title. If the chapter continues to focus and goes into more detail on that event, I'm hooked. I'd be disappointed if it was referring to something way in the past or later in the book.
Hooked
ReplyDeleteHooked!
ReplyDeleteHooked.
ReplyDeleteHooked. Especially curious as it sounds like there was a crowd and this ONE WOMAN made a difference. Hooked for sure.
ReplyDeleteVampires? You kiddin'?
ReplyDeleteHOOKED!! ㋡
Sorry, I'm not hooked yet... I'm not sure about the line... it sounds like an incomplete sentence for some reason.
ReplyDeleteNot hooked. What day? If you tell us the sister's life was saved, you've told us the end of the story..
ReplyDeleteOh, yeah.
ReplyDeletePossibly. It's not ringing quite right for me. But I like the title.
ReplyDeleteDig it!!
ReplyDeleteI like it!
ReplyDeleteNot hooked, sorry. I don't want to be told what WILL happen, I want to see it unfold. This kills all tension for me.
ReplyDeleteI like the title, though.
Partially hooked. I'm hoping that his sister's life being saved is the START of the story, not something we're going to jump back in time and work our way up to.
ReplyDeleteShow me how his/her sister's life being saved sets off a string of other events and I'm with you.
Thank you all for your advice and comments! :)
ReplyDeleteI just wanted to clarify that his sister's life being saved is something that occurs within the first few pages of the story and is also the moment that triggers a series of events. It isn't the end of the novel, but I understand why some may think that since I referred to the day as "that day" instead of "this day" (which was something I was debating before).
I hope that makes more sense. :)
Great title. If the chapter continues to focus and goes into more detail on that event, I'm hooked. I'd be disappointed if it was referring to something way in the past or later in the book.
ReplyDeleteFind this to be a cliche.
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