Partial hook. I'd read on to find out how self-absorbed the MC was and whether she learned her lesson, but she has a strong, solid voice and I'd want to see what else she had to say.
haha! She sounds so full of herself! I would read it, but hope that the entire book isn't this way (i.e. character growth). But I am definitely hooked.
I'm not a fan of your character, though the mention of being friends with the mirror intrigued me. Because this is fantasy, I'm wondering if she means they are literally friends.
I want to read more about this conceited...well you know :)
ReplyDeletehooked :)
Mirror mirror on the wall.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure. I might read further.
Partial hook. I'd read on to find out how self-absorbed the MC was and whether she learned her lesson, but she has a strong, solid voice and I'd want to see what else she had to say.
ReplyDeleteIs this Stuart Smalley's sister? Partial hook.
ReplyDeleteHOOKED!!!
ReplyDeleteI must know MORE! ㋡
The character turns me off. It'd depend on whether or not anything else had grabbed my attention.
ReplyDeletePartially hooked - I'd read to learn more.
ReplyDeleteLove it. Hooked!
ReplyDeleteNot hooked, but certainly intrigued. I'd read further. I like the voice.
ReplyDeleteI love the character already. Despite the conceit, which normally bugs me to no end. :)
ReplyDeleteToo narcisstic for my tastes.
ReplyDeleteReally like it. Hate the title though.
ReplyDeleteI like the voice a lot. I'd keep reading.
ReplyDeleteThe title's actually the name of a country, Keren--but yeah, that's never my strong point. (grin)
ReplyDeleteAMY
Hooked, because of the voice.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely hooked by this. Want to know how the character's vanity and certainty is going to mesh with the plot.
ReplyDeleteI can't tell if the MC is being serious or facetious. I'd read more just to figure out which it is.
ReplyDeleteword verify = crize or crazy?
Nice writing, but I don't think I like the narrator.
ReplyDeletehaha! She sounds so full of herself! I would read it, but hope that the entire book isn't this way (i.e. character growth). But I am definitely hooked.
ReplyDeleteGood voice but I wouldn't read more because the character makes me want to puke. I have to like what's at the begining to want to read more.
ReplyDeleteLove this.
ReplyDeleteAlmost hooked--but it would depend a lot on what comes next and if you could make the narrator interesting and sympathetic enough to engage me.
ReplyDeleteCute hook.
ReplyDeleteI'd hope that she doesn't stay like this though.
I'm not a fan of your character, though the mention of being friends with the mirror intrigued me. Because this is fantasy, I'm wondering if she means they are literally friends.
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