Miss Snark's First Victim
Hooked, though it sounds suspiciously like backstory.
Total hook. I'm intrigued and hugely want to know the details!
Yep. I want more. I'm already trying to think what it would be. You hear a loved one is dead - then hear five minutes later it's not true? Hmmm...
I'm hooked, and would read more.
Definitely hooked. I want to know which came first, the best or worst moment? Exciting.
Very interesting. I'd read on.
Hooked! The wording might be tripping me up a bit, but I can't put my finger on what's bugging me. And the premise is intriguing enough!
Love it. Now I want to read more to find out the best and the worst parts!
Well, I liked it, but it's a little sloppy, I guess. Is there another way you could word it? Truth be told, I was hooked by your title - fantastic, I definitely would want to read more.
I agree with Bethany Elizabeth. I'm really intrigued by the concept, but the wording seems awkward.
Curious to read more.
Close. Not for me, I think, but I think it's hooky.
I like it and would read on. I'm curious to find out what happens next.
Mostly hooked. Hoping that what follows will start right in with those five minutes.
Not hooked, sorry.
I liked the hook, but thought the first part of the sentence could have been worded more strongly
My first thought as I read the first part of the sentence was a sarcastic Oh really? Cuz i know plenty of folks who can claim best and worst in the same year.Not sure this is that strong of an opening even if rewritten tho--
I thought the second part was stronger than the first. I've found important events tend to cluster, so the bit about most people not having their best and worst in a year didn't really ring true for me. But having both within five minutes... that hooked me and made me want to read on for at least a little bit.