Miss Snark's First Victim
Not really hooked, but it might be a personal preference. I just don't have a reason to care.
The writing is good, and I'm suympthetic to the character. I'd keep reading.
I'm on the fence, I would a little more, but I'm not completely hooked
I probably wouldn't read on.
I think there's a good bit of conflict brewing already. I'd read more.
I'm in. I'm hooked and I want more.
Not sure I'm totally hooked, but I would read on. I like the "V-day". Makes me think there's some personality there and things could get interesting.
Semi-hooked. I might read a little more.
I would keep reading. I have enough questions I already want answered to read further. :-)
Could be hooked. I'd read more. We have a mystery here, even though it's just a card. But you could make the second parg active by showing her searching, pulling the bed from against the wall, instead of telling us.
I'm hooked...I love books that break things down with times and dates...
HOOKED! "V-Day" n' "pulled my bed out from against the wall" sucked me in! N' I LOVE the title! ㋡
I like the voice, but am not really hooked.
I love the title and that might get me to give it more of a chance, but the opening doesn't hook me.
I wouldn't care enough to read onI need a little context to want to go on