Miss Snark's First Victim
Heh. This made me smile so I guess I'm hooked enough to read a little more.
Gotta love a guy who KNOWS he makes stupid mistakes. Got me good.
This one got me too. I'd keep reading...
I don't usually read suspense, so I'd probably not have picked this one up to start off with. That said, I'm intrigued and would probably keep reading this one.
Probably would pass.
It was okay, but I think it could be stronger. Maybe start off with the mistake, showing rather than telling us about it.
not so hooked
Mildly hooked. It would depend on if the situation pays off. I would be more effectively hooked if I had an idea of the situation first and the comment later.
I liked it. I'd read on to see exactly what was going on.
Yep. Like that the MC knows himself (at least a little!).
I am curious to know what the stupid mistake is, so I guess that qalifies as hooked.
Not hooked. It read YA to me, then I saw it was suspense. It just has a younger feel to it and doesn't feel like suspense.
Hooked. I liked the stupid mistake, and I'd keep reading to see what it was.
In one line there is a character I can relate to already. I would keep going.
Hooked IF there's a payoff. I totally don't mind being told about it (rather than shown), but the payoff is everything. Good luck!
Hooked! I like it when a character is able to see their own foibles.
I'm not completely sold, but I like it enough I'd read on.
I missed this first time through..like it...hooked for sure :)
This doesn't hook me, but I'd give it a little bit more to see what the current mistake was.
seemed ho-hum to mea guy who knows he makes stupid mistakes not a hook for memaybe a guy who doesn't expect to ever make mistakes and then makes a biggy would be more interesting to me...If this is suspense I'd not be intersted in a whole book with a guy who's already identified as someone who makes stupid mistakes...I'm not expecting much here if the suspense rides on his stupid mistakes