Miss Snark's First Victim
I wish I could see the illustrations that would be included with this. It would be something I'd buy for my kids.
I like it as well...
Nice, though I had to check the genre b/c I was originally thinking WTF :) -- guess I need to go get me some kids.
I like it.
I'd buy it for my kids. :)
Sounds like the beginning of a lovely bedtime story. Kids love poetry, and the cadence usually means that it's an "easy read" for parents.Hope it goes somewhere!
Gentle and lyrical.
Love this opening . . . yes, it is very lyrical, something I could easily read at bedtime. Hope it's published soon! :)
This is good. Even without the picks! I'd pick it up for my kid, and see if he'd like it.
I agree, lovely writing that sounds perfect for a picture book. My kids are hooked.
Wonderful. Loved it. Want to buy it right now.
Oooohhh!!! I love that this is about dreams. I would definitely read this to my kids!
I love it and can see it as a perfect bedtime story! I imagine the illustrations would be dreamy, too!
Absolutely! Great job! And I can't wait to read the whole thing to see where you take it. Really enjoyed this one. Thanks.
Very sweet, my only concern is can you market it without having a problem in the story? Rhyming picture books are a hard sell according to every editor I've met. It's lovely. Best wishes with it.
Hooked! I can imagine the pictures.
sounds like a nice book. I'm hooked
Hard to judge a picture book just on text. *shrug* I like rhyming books though, so I'd probably keep reading