Thursday, March 25, 2010

75 Picture Book

TITLE: Dreams
DREAMS: Picture Book


What kind of dreams will you dream tonight?

Will they be colorful, bold and bright?

Or will they stay soft as morning’s light

21 comments:

  1. I wish I could see the illustrations that would be included with this. It would be something I'd buy for my kids.

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  2. Nice, though I had to check the genre b/c I was originally thinking WTF :) -- guess I need to go get me some kids.

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  3. Sounds like the beginning of a lovely bedtime story. Kids love poetry, and the cadence usually means that it's an "easy read" for parents.

    Hope it goes somewhere!

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  4. Love this opening . . . yes, it is very lyrical, something I could easily read at bedtime. Hope it's published soon! :)

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  5. This is good. Even without the picks! I'd pick it up for my kid, and see if he'd like it.

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  6. I agree, lovely writing that sounds perfect for a picture book. My kids are hooked.

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  7. Wonderful. Loved it. Want to buy it right now.

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  8. Oooohhh!!! I love that this is about dreams. I would definitely read this to my kids!

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  9. I love it and can see it as a perfect bedtime story! I imagine the illustrations would be dreamy, too!

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  10. Absolutely! Great job! And I can't wait to read the whole thing to see where you take it. Really enjoyed this one. Thanks.

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  11. Very sweet, my only concern is can you market it without having a problem in the story? Rhyming picture books are a hard sell according to every editor I've met. It's lovely. Best wishes with it.

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  12. Hooked! I can imagine the pictures.

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  13. Hard to judge a picture book just on text. *shrug* I like rhyming books though, so I'd probably keep reading

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