Miss Snark's First Victim
*smiles* I was trying to hold this back, but I keep staring at his first name. I'd read on simply to find out where that came from.
HOOKED! Love the title! N' I love the era n' genre you appear to be writing about....COOL! ㋡
The name distracted me so much I had to read it three times before I finished the first sentence. If it was a book in front of me I'd read more but if I was thrown or confused again, I wouldn't continue. So I guess I'm hooked with a caveat! :)
The name threw me at first. I kept picturing a pole-dancer. I'd keep reading, but like Amy, I don't want to get lost again.
I don't know. I'd give it a bit more to decide.
The name was a distraction to me also, but I liked the set up. I could see it.
Not really hooked, sorry. Might be a genre thing. Although I'm amused and almost like his name.
The name put me off right away and I couldn't recover. Sorry.
I didn't mind the name, liked the visual it set up and would read on