I'd read more because I like Sci-fi. But as someone else said, if things weren't on track, and there was less time, it would definitely be more interesting.
Not really hooked. With 58 minutes to wait, I would think he'd be going through the checklist a few more times before it was time for whatever is about to happen.
I would read more though, but I'm afraid with almost an hour to go that I'd have to skip ahead to chapter 2 before anything really happened.
A little hooked...
ReplyDeleteYes. Hooked. I would be reading on a little more to see what this checklist was and what was going to happen in 58 minutes.
ReplyDeleteNot hooked. Too vague.
ReplyDeleteEh. Twenty-five words is hard. For me, it might be more hooky if everything wasn't on track.
ReplyDeleteNot hooked. Sorry.
ReplyDeleteNot enough info to say 'hooked.' But I'd read a few more paras just for the genre alone.
ReplyDeleteI like SF. I'd read on.
ReplyDeleteA little hooked.
ReplyDeleteNot completely hooked, but I would keep reading a bit further to see if it finished catching me.
ReplyDeleteToo little to say whether I'm hooked, but I'd read on a little more.
ReplyDeleteStill reading.
ReplyDeleteI'd read more because I like Sci-fi. But as someone else said, if things weren't on track, and there was less time, it would definitely be more interesting.
ReplyDeleteWhat Momwoman said.
ReplyDeleteIf I had picked this up in a bookstore, I'd definitely read more to see what's going on. There's tension there, so that keeps in.
A little hooked.
ReplyDeleteWho is Tanner? Not hooked.
ReplyDelete58 minutes until what? he went shopping for cookies? not hooked enough to keep reading. it's feels like a pull-the-rug-out trickster opener.
ReplyDeleteNot really hooked. With 58 minutes to wait, I would think he'd be going through the checklist a few more times before it was time for whatever is about to happen.
ReplyDeleteI would read more though, but I'm afraid with almost an hour to go that I'd have to skip ahead to chapter 2 before anything really happened.
I don't think there's enough here to hook me. Sorry.
ReplyDeleteMaybe it'd be better to go into the newspaper headline mode...
ReplyDelete58 minutes to go. Everything was on track. Tanner knew the checklist by heart now.
Just a suggestion.
Not hooked, sorry.
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