Miss Snark's First Victim
Hooked. Not fond of the Friday the 13th ref, but that's just me. I'd read more to see where it went.
Hooked. I'd definitely read more.
Hooked. I'd definitely read more. The voice of the main character comes through loud and clear.
I'm immediately thinking reincarnation here, which could be interesting and hook enough for me. :) Only suggest putting a period after April 13th.
Hooked. Great beginning!
I liked it! I'd read more to find out how that was even possible.
Hooked on that first sentence.
Not hooked. The first sentence was a bit overmuch for me.
Good hook. I'd read on.
Hooked! I'd definitely read on.
Somehow I didn't catch the Friday the 13th reference and the sentence didn't make much sense the first time through.
Hooked. Really liked it. Got a real sense of voice in these few words.
So hooked.And I loved the Friday the 13th reference. :)
hooked. Liked this one a lot.
I'm definitely curious here. I'd read on.
That's a hook!
I'd read-on, but this is a little loose. I might skip the date...
Not hooked -- more dying kids -- but also not my genre.
Yep! I'm hooked. :-)
I like it and I'm even tiring of all the paranormal, dead stories; but it still caught my attention. Good job!
If she/he's not been born, then it's a fetus? Too confusing for me. Not hooked.
Love it. I would definitely read on. I like the Friday the 13th reference. Gives it that extra sense of dread and brings out the voice and the character's personality.
Definitely interesting - would read on!
Hooked, I'd read on. I liked the reference to the 13th, perked my interest.
Not what I read, but definitely hooked.
Hooked, and I'm not into paranormal at all.
Hooked. I like the voice.
too clever without any context