Miss Snark's First Victim
I'm hooked, but I'd remove "Ladbroke Grove" as it's tough to take in three full names in two sentences.
It's a Fantastic story but then I'm biased I was a beta reader. Love it!
I love the first sentence. I'd keep reading and hope the voice held up.
I like the voice. I'd read on.
The first sentence grabbed me. This isn't my usual genre, but I'd keep going.
I liked this one. Made me smile.
LOVED this opening! Totally hooked.
I would keep reading.
It didn't do anything for me.Too many proper names in too short a space, I think.
I laughed at these lines. I'm hooked!
Great hook! Has me curious...
Hooked. This made me chuckle.
I'd read more.
Ladbroke Grove is a mouthful but such a great British mouthful! Love it. Love it. I don't think I've ever seen the beginning. Woot! Seriously I'm hooked even without knowing what's coming.If you are worried about the 3 proper names- I say leave off Scott.
I like it - but then I love Jimmi Hendrix.
Almost hooked--I like the voice and would read on a bit to see what's going on.